Analysis of Try to see inside

Star Alvarado 2004 (Indiana)



The more you lie the more I cry
wondering why you like to lie.
Do you lie to see me die inside?
What you see outside is not inside.
What's bottled up inside is for no ones eyes.
My soul can barely hide what is behind.
Truth is dead but lying is sin
What to choose is harder to them.
If one is dead and one is sin
How can you choose between them.


Scheme AABBCDEFEF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 01110111 10011111 111111101 111111101 11010111111 1111011101 11111011 11111011 11110111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 345
Words 80
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 264
Words per stanza (avg) 74

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to the dilemma of lying and speaking the truth. How for some they don't want to speak the truth but they don't want to lie.

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Written on November 09, 2022

Submitted by staralvarado2004 on November 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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