Analysis of What matters?

Raj Deep 2005 (Punjab)



Something more crucial than cash,
But you put in your hours like trash.

It's a treasure, the true self,
Who cares, just chit-chat about wealth.

Now you are chasing after money,
In due time, there will be chasing after life
Ahhh very funny.

Age never hangs fire, not for a moment
Today materialistic world governs you
Tomorrow you will we governing if capable,
its adamant.

You are existence is not concerns within four walls,
Get in the big sky it's an urgent call.


Scheme AA XX BXB CXXC XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011 111011011 1010011 11111011 111101010 01111110101 11010 11011011010 01000101101 011111001100 1100 1101011010111 1001111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 469
Words 96
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 4, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Life is a precious gift from god. No doubt it is very challenging but monotonous life is not interesting at all. Take care of this valuable present and do what matters the most in life.

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Written on November 06, 2022

Submitted by rktatla6 on November 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Raj Deep

My name is Raj Deep. I am 17 years old. I am studying in Dayanad Medical College & Hospital, College of Nursing, Malakpur, Ludhiana. more…

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