Analysis of Sunshine’s Whispers (Revised)
Woke up with the morning sign
Saw on window the sunshine
Red Sun tablet, in content
Set to give the it's consent
Calm Sun Ray touched the mind
What is that? I’m sure to find!
Notion came with the Sun rays
Red is first in all the ways
“Shake n wake on active red,
I want you to leave your bed”
“I'll send you on time a beep,
Listen, I won’t let you sleep”
“Think of me n you wake up
To work do your mind make up”
“Keep you effort, Golden Rays,
You have to work night’s n days”
Felt sun ray conveys to me:
“I ‘m busy like a bee”
“I grow fruit, vegetables,
I give all names, Labels”
”No harm to good” that's Sunshine,
”From The God have Line”
Scheme | AA BB CC DD EE FF GG DD HH II AA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1 1110101 111001 1110010 1110101 111101 1111111 1011011 1110101 1111101 1111111 1111101 1011111 1111111 1111111 1110101 1111111 1110111 1110101 111100 111110 111111 10111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 759 |
Words | 170 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 43 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 12 |
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