Analysis of DEAD

azdi404 1967 (california)



crazy about you
that’s the rumors
eager to devour you
a glooming light
in the susceptible side of my head
a jab in my face
your loving the other man
shun so strong it broke the walls
of my devotion
to generate hatred
I Have one for myself and share it with you..

Loving you is as much
equal to hating  you
a new pledge
an ominous date
poisoned rays
skeletons in me
love’s a seed
plant one in me
I’m out of skin
covering mistakes
paving ways for you
you’re just a stroke of good luck gone wrong
better to be ignored than hated
I love you in my sight

still
I hate you when away
I love you as I bleed
needing you on this side
among the living dead


Scheme AXABCXXXXDA XAXXXEFEXXAXDB XXFXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 10011 1010 1010101 011 0001001111 01011 1100101 1111101 11010 11010 1111101111 101111 101101 011 11001 101 10001 101 1101 1111 10001 10111 110111111 101101110 111011 1 111101 111111 101111 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 660
Words 141
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 11, 14, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 44

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loving her when i'm dead or alive

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Written on November 24, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 02, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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