Analysis of The heavens and earth shall become as one.



I remember the day you came to me,
that way the day I started to see.
And on that day your love was received,
and that same day was when I believed.

From out of the darkness you showed me a light.
And when I was blind you have me sight.
Once I was broken, I felt so lost.
Then you came to me caring the cross.

Everything I have was given by you,
and everything in me you've made brand new.
The day I took you into my heart,
was the day I knew we would never be apart.

And for that Lord I give thanks and pray,
and I'll sing and worship your name all day.
For I know when your work is finally done.
All the heavens and earth shall become as one.


Scheme AABB CCXX DDEE FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1010011111 110111011 011111101 011111101 11101011101 011111111 111101111 111111001 101111011 010011111 011110111 101111110101 011111101 0110101111 11111111001 10100110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 647
Words 154
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 34

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Remembering a time when I was broken then fixed

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Written on December 11, 2022

Submitted by stephenp.13791 on December 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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