Analysis of The Lucky Day



A cloudy day on the road full of dirt and dust

I(He) decided to go to church in search of peace

Then came the swirling winds and then the dust in his eyes

“Damn..! Oh Damn must be an unlucky day”

Wiping the eyes and then the lucky strike

Wiping the eyes and then the beauty strikes

That’s when he saw her getting down from the car carrying such charm, delicacy and style

Blurred vision and then the dreamy day

Fogs cleared and the dullness gone, while she became more visible

“Is that the thick bent eyebrows, just like a rainbow?”

“Is that the long wavy hair, just like waves in beach?”

“Is that a sharp pointed nose, just like a knife”?

“Is that a statue as a whole, just like made by a chisel?”

There she goes wearing a white dress contrasting the Whitish complexion

“Walking behind you and looking at you until you took a seat

When everyone was busy in prayers and thoughts

I ended up with my vision fixated on you”


Scheme X X X A X X X A B X X X B X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 010110111101 111011110111 1101010101011 1111110101 1001010101 1001010101 1111010110110011100001 110010101 110010111011100 1101111101 110110111101 11011011101 11011011111010 11110011010010010 1001101011011101 1101100101 110111101011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 970
Words 201
Sentences 6
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

The poem is based on the theme of Love and Attraction

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Written on December 20, 2022

Submitted by archana.801555 on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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