Analysis of What you Do to Me
JD Haugrose 1969 (Montana)
What you Do to Me
Oh Rhonda, what you do to me.
My face lights up with a smile so big.
My heart just missed some beats.
That smile you wear holds my stare.
As you walk in the room where we meet.
Oh my, my heart just missed another beat.
I study how you walk and with each step you take,
I feel so lucky and proud your walking right to me.
My mind races as I wonder what you see in me.
Oh wow, my heart just skipped another beat.
The closer you get, the bigger the smile upon my face.
I thank the Lord that we met.
My heart no longer skips a beat.
You put my hearts rhythm back in sync
As you lean over and simply smile.
Oh Rhonda, what you do to me!
Scheme | a AxxxbbxaabxxbxxA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 11011111 111110111 111111 1111111 111001111 1111110101 110111011111 1111001110111 1110111011101 1111110101 01011010010111 1101111 11110101 111110101 111100101 11011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 667 |
Words | 158 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 16 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 246 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 70 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem because of a new love that loves the words I write.
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Written on December 13, 2022
Submitted by jdhaugrose on December 13, 2022
Modified on March 12, 2023
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