Analysis of Eclipse of Existence: A Pessimistic Sonnet



Wrapped in a fog of dismal dejection,
Alone in the home, with nought for solace
But a voice on the phone, to ease the oppression
As clouds gather in a dark and ominous brace

The skies darken to a somber, inky shade
As lightning strikes, illuminating the night
The earth beneath quivering, as if afraid
As winds whip and howl in a frenzied blight

And rain begins to pour in a deluge grand
On screens, the news shows images of woe
Cyclonic storms wreaking havoc on the land
In spinning paths of destruction they go

So close, yet so terrifying to see
The futility of life's struggles, plain to me
As the tempest rages, I am but a pawn
In the grand scheme of things, insignificant and drawn

To the eternal cycle of birth and death
Where all our efforts are but a fleeting breath.


Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE FFAA GG
Poetic Form
Metre 10011101 0100111110 101101110010 111000101001 01101010101 1101010001 01011001101 1110100101 01011100101 1101110011 111010101 0101101011 111110011 001001110111 10101011101 001111010001 10010101101 111010110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 779
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

The sonnet above is a complex and pessimistic piece that evokes a sense of despair and hopelessness. The use of complex English vocabulary and imagery creates a vivid and powerful portrayal of the speaker's emotional state.

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Written on January 15, 2023

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on January 14, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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