Analysis of Life



You do not have to move houses
or leave home
To find happiness
It should come from your inner being
And when you are certain of who you are right now
I am torn between a new me
A me I dont like
the helpless me
The concession me
I hate this state of being
Every pore oozes bile
I wish to regurgitate
past moments
past hours
I hold a salve
to my wounded heart
Until I find the cure
to my dying soul
I will continue
this picture of living!


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (50%)
Etheree  (35%)
Metre 11111110 111 11100 111111010 011110111111 11101011 01111 0101 00101 1111110 1001101 11110 110 110 1101 11101 011101 11101 11010 110110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 92
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

This poem is about the conundrum of life and how we try to best cope with it.

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Written on August 15, 2001

Submitted by taminator2016 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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