Analysis of SERENDIPIDOUS

Kaci Tami 1960 (Vatukoula)



Sometimes in quiet moments
I rethink the moments, hours, days, years
that ahve passed me by
Once I could say
Yes i know where I am going
Now I am uncertain
of what life has to offer
Lord gives me the strength
the wisdom
the serenity
to see right from wrong
to harness my wits
and fined courage
in the love of a man
to believe in him
in us
Lord, sometimes it gets too dark
And I want to just walk
out the door
But I have children I am responisble to
And all that life has to give
Sometimes I feel like running away
but alas has to stay


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUDD
Poetic Form
Metre 0101010 1010101011 11111 1111 11111110 111010 1111110 11101 010 00100 11111 11011 0110 001101 10101 01 1011111 011111 101 111101111 0111111 011111001 101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 535
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 420
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

This is a reflective poem on how life sometimes life gets too much with the choices of mine.

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Written on August 10, 2008

Submitted by taminator2016 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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