Analysis of Fastness



Hear me, O Lord when I cry,
Be gracious and answer me;
Giving out a mournful sigh,
For my distress, You can see.

My heart says to seek my face,
Your face O Lord do I seek;
Let me feel Your sweet embrace,
Because of my feeling weak.

Conceal not Your face from me,
Turn not Your servant away;
With no desire to flee,
For I do not want to stray.

My parents did forsake me,
Abandoned because of sin;
An orphan on bended knee,
I plead the Lord takes me in.

Teach me of Your way, O Lord,
Lead me on a level path;
As to live in one accord,
Far from my foes and their wrath.

My foes will bear false witness,
And breathing out violence;
Boost my spiritual fitness,
For You are my best defense.

I believe in Your goodness,
In the land of the living;
Away from vulgar rudeness,
Violent chaos would bring.

So I wait for you O Lord,
Letting Your heart take courage;
Strengthening me to afford,
With You never to discourage.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD BEBE BFBF GHGH IXIX IJIJ GXGX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1100101 1010101 1101111 1111111 1111111 1111101 0111101 0111111 1111001 1101011 1111111 1101011 0100111 1101101 1101110 1111111 1110101 1110101 1111011 1111110 0101100 11100010 1111101 1010110 0011010 0111010 1001011 1111111 1011110 1001101 11101010 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 958
Words 223
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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The LORD Is My Light and My Salvation Psalm 27:7-14

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Written on January 23, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on January 22, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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