Analysis of Beside the Clay

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Does it help
If I just simply sit a while
Here beside
You as you reel in recent pain?

Naught to say
No thoughts to re-invent your smile.
Hurts too much.
Will you hold up ‘neath all this strain?

Sun will rise
But it will surely take a while.
God is love.
You, clay upon His wheel again.

Turning, yearning
For relief and smiles.
Revelation comes with cost
His dawning Domain.

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Scheme XAXB XAXB XAXX XXXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11110101 101 11110101 111 11110111 111 11111111 111 11110101 111 11011101 1010 10101 010111 11001 010101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 463
Words 97
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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