Analysis of Miserable me
Sitting on the bathroom floor
holding my heart tight
while the tears burst out
from my black pupil eyes,
i have turned my self
into a monster, I think
i have thoughts in my mind
may be i can't let them sink
I know am different
I don't fit in
but am trying so hard
so let me in
Let me in this world
as blood oozes from corners
of my viens that I slit
to grieve for my self
crawling my skin Little bit.
how do I say that
there's a monster in my head
that makes me shivery
I don't belong here
am taking me away with it.
Scheme | AXXX BCXC XDXD XXEBE XXAXE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101011 10111 10111 111101 11111 0101011 111011 1111111 111100 1110 111011 1110 11011 1110110 111111 11111 1011101 11111 1010011 1111 11011 11010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 536 |
Words | 132 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 80 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
Life is hard, things are unsaid, undone but unsaid things always find their ways to be penned!
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Written on January 12, 2023
Submitted by shiviupadhyay309 on January 21, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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