Analysis of Under a lovers moon



Oh what could take place under a lover's moon...
Your chest rises and falls with each breath you take,  Wanting to kiss your lips but your sleep I do not want to break.
As if you feel me watching you, your eyes open slightly, you put me in close and hold me tightly.
I dare not move as my body slowly heats next to yours, As if the room was to fill with flames rising from the floors.
Trying to control all the emotions flowing over me, extremely terrified that they can be seen.
Tracing your face with my finger as I start to swoon, As my imagination runs wild under a lovers moon.


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Poetic Form
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Characters 582
Words 119
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 76
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 453
Words per stanza (avg) 115

About this poem

Just the passing feeling while laying in bed staring out the window at the night sky.

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Written on January 01, 2022

Submitted by krystal_g on January 21, 2023

Modified on April 15, 2023

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Krystal Golightly

Mother of 2, wife, home maker. Lover of all things wild and free. more…

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