Analysis of My children



Being thrown from the chaos of dark.
Wonder if they know?

There the very reasons for my being.
Purpose
Reason for my heart opening with love
Reason for my senile-isms
Reasons for my smiles.
Oh loud laughters too.

My purpose is to live for me
But really.  
It's for you

Wonder if they ever will know
The reason I finally commit ,
To all life's little joys.
Reason for everything my daughter's and my boys.


Scheme XA XXXXXB CCB AXDD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (53%)
Metre 101101011 10111 1010101110 10 1011110011 1011110 10111 1111 11011111 110 111 10111011 010110001 111101 10110110011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 436
Words 97
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 3, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Simple short poem continued from part ones boyfriend whom held a women in the dark, to her children gently bringing her back to life

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Written on February 11, 2023

Submitted by christina_e on February 11, 2023

Modified by christina_e on April 01, 2023

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