Analysis of Commended Faith



For what more shall I say,
That time would never fail;
As to trust and obey,
Before the trumpet wail.

Through faith conquers kingdoms,
And enforcing justice;
Promises of freedoms,
Of faith that you practice.

Quench power from fire,
Escape from the sharp sword;
Quit tempting desire,
That conflicts with the Lord.

From weakness we were strong,
Became mighty in war;
Foreign armies were wrong,
Fell like a falling star.

Women receive their dead,
Rise to a better life;
Redemption they are led,
Far from toil and strife.

Others suffer mocking,
Imprisoned wearing chains;
Been beaten through flogging,
Undergo severe pains.

They were killed with the sword,
In being afflicted;
For they knew not the Lord,
As Satan tormented.

The world was not worthy,
Lost in the wilderness;
No longer feeling free,
Been put under duress.

Through their faith commended,
Received not the promise;
For their life has ended,
Brought from holy justice.

God provides better ways,
Though we are not perfect;
Anyone who obeys,
The Lord does not reject.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GXGX HIHI JKJK FLFM NDNX MDLD OPOP E
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111101 111001 010101 111010 001010 100110 111110 110110 011011 110010 101101 110101 011001 101001 110101 100111 110101 010111 11101 101010 010101 110110 01011 101101 010010 111101 11010 011110 100100 110101 111010 111010 011010 111110 111010 101101 111101 10101 011101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,074
Words 225
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

Faith through the Ages Hebrews 11:32-40

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Written on February 24, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on February 23, 2023

Modified on April 12, 2023

1:07 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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