Analysis of Sacred Rose



Remember the embrace of a dream,
Breath quivering,
The whisper of love,
Screams within the soul.
Like wild animals,
Blood boils quick.

Ocean symphony lingers beneath,
The brilliant shine,
Of a thousand diamond sky.
Warm vision of beauty,
And peace,
Present to eternity.

Black moon,
Devouring the heart,
Prisoner in the rain.
Darkened eyes,
Almost raw inside,
A broken, ghostly fool,
Sailing on the soft breeze,
of a slow death.


Scheme XXXXXX XXXAXA XXXXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 010001101 1100 01011 10101 11100 111 101001001 0101 1010101 110110 01 1010100 11 010001 100001 101 1101 010101 101011 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 429
Words 91
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 8
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Fridge Magnets. Words popped of an old love that never dies, despite best efforts.

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Submitted by Carlyle.Vice on February 24, 2023

Modified by Carlyle.Vice on March 19, 2023

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Carlyle Vice

Raised on old fashion played in red clay and red dirt. A old soul lost in a modern world. Enjoys the symphony of combat over the chaos of society. Wild and nomadic. Possess a heavenly embrace, a devilish grin and a silver tongue. more…

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