Analysis of The Shantyman (working, sharing Christ’s best)



It is good to toilWith the men I know;
And to trim the treesAnd to lay them low;
And to haul their bulkTo the stream below;
I am glad that the Lord sent me here.
And from time to time
When the mood is right,
In the vaulted wood
With its dappled light;
I can hear the Jay.
Blue and cranky some
He becomes my friend
From coniferous home.
I will work the trees
Bring them down so proud
Crack the cuttings ring.
They crash down so loud.
And we hook and pull
To the stream below
Horses know routine
They are sure and slow.
Evening comes at last
With the fires and stew
And we chat of things.
Even God might do.
Jesus found right here.
Little Guy who prays
And the weeks will pass
And the Season pays.


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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 713
Words 159
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 140
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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 10, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 10, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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