Analysis of Avoid the Violent Path



Forsake not of my teaching,
Place gracefully on your head;
Through your ear, it is reaching,
As to that, your mind is fed.

Let sinners not entice you,
Never to lie in their blood;
For they will never construe,
In the deluge of a flood.

Hell will swallow them alive,
Going down into the pit;
Their souls will never survive,
Since not spiritually fit.

They would find all precious things,
And fill houses with plunder;
To cast off their lot that brings,
The wrath of God with thunder.

Do not walk their way with them,
Hold back your foot from their path;
For I know God will condemn,
To feel the force of His wrath.

For their feet run to evil,
They make haste in shedding blood;
Nets spread snared by the devil,
While drowning in the flood.

For their blood, they lie in wait,
Unaware of their demise;
In Heaven, finds a locked gate,
As Satan did take their lives.

The ways for the unjust gain,
Greed is taking away life;
Desire will cause them pain,
Being possessors of strife.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KDKD LXLX MNMN H
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110 1100111 1111110 1111111 1101011 1011011 1111001 0010101 1110101 1010101 1111001 11100001 1111101 0110110 1111111 0111110 1111111 1111111 1111101 1101111 1111110 1110101 1111010 110001 1111101 011101 0101011 1101111 0110011 1110011 0101111 10111 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,023
Words 226
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

The Enticement of Sinners Proverbs 1:8-19

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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on March 15, 2023

Modified on March 16, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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