Analysis of Hunger & Hope



I been hungry for the throne right from when I was a boy.
I had nothing to hold, and it made me so annoyed.

And then there came a dream that would take me out of shame,
the Glory of The Lord that will be give me all the fame.

I couldn't rest my head cause I had nowhere to stay,
so then I had to run miles very far away.

All I had on my mind was some help and then the grace,
but lots and lots of struggles on my way I had to face.

There was a time I sat just right across the road,
with my head bowed down, and a need for one to hold.

But almost all I met looked down on me in disdain,
and I couldn't stop myself from wallowing in my pain.

Only one thing I had asked, that they give me their support.
For where I was was cold, and at the same time very hot.

I wrote to men and ladies, thinking I could get their pity.
I told them of my worries, and that I was very needy.

No man was near to help, and no one that I could call.
But yes I have my Savior who will get me through it all.

I know I have the talent, and I know I'll make it out.
And finally when it happens, I will gather many crowns.

I will gather lots of likes, and also so many fans.
I will travel round the globe with my parents and sisters.

Of course I am a star and the world is gonna know.
My fame and wealth so many, and it's obvious it will show.


Scheme XX AA BB CC XX DD XX EE FF XX XX GG
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11101011111101 1110110111101 0111011111111 01010111111101 110111111111 111111110101 1111111110101 11011101111111 110111110101 111110011111 111111111001 0110111100011 10111111111101 11111101011101 111101010111110 111111001111010 1111110111111 11111101111111 11110100111111 010011101110101 11101110101101 11101011110010 1111010011101 110111001100111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,327
Words 319
Sentences 19
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Highlights the travails, hunger and hopeful victory of a young lad.

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Written on March 23, 2023

Submitted by iamfemiwhite on March 23, 2023

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