Analysis of midday light penetrates inside the mustached men



midday light penetrates inside the mustached men

under mother's burdock lies silence hard as Ukrainian bones

still there lies a drunkard like a sentinel in an insect paradise

Dandelion's swollen brain explodes with an ease not seen in Bounty commercials

those that have become amulets on the neck of the quiet hour fly close to the heart

they lose when the children on the street start sharing cakes


Scheme X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111001011 101011101101001 1110101010001110 11010111111010010 1110110010110101011101 1110101011101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 404
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by Sviatoslav on March 28, 2023

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