Analysis of Where should I sleep



Where should I sleep

There are many rooms that I have seen
Always fitting in where it might suit me
I wear my heart upon my sleeve but there is never space for my arms, my unexpected deity

Where I lay my head is not my true bed
I walk from room to room but never find my identity
I look for you. The small one, the medium and the big one too
For now I am a Goldilocks, walking these rooms

One day I dream of sleep but for now I can only weep
The times where I was allowed to be free
I sit in chains, feels like my head is circling round a drain
I am lost, I wish for sleep, the time will pass, another waking dream to cast

So for now I walk the halls, which room for me really calls
I think my time has come, a moment passed, a room of moss
My room has gone, I travel, I feel such loss.

Come back my bed, I wish so much to lay my head
I will walk and feel a happiness here, alone but knowing you have always been there.
Good night my little ones, I will dream again, I will wake always to be your Mum.


Scheme A XBB CBXX ABXX XDD CXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 111011111 110011111 111101111111011111010100 1111111111 111111110110100 1111011010000111 11110101011 11111111111101 0111101111 110111111100101 1111111011101010111 11111011111101 11111101010111 11111101111 111111111111 11101010010111011111 1111011110111111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,010
Words 222
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

There are moments in motherhood which step testing. Luckily those moments have subsided. This was a moment where I was lost or perhaps more precisely could not be found.

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Written on December 12, 2022

Submitted by Jacquelinefisher on April 22, 2023

1:06 min read
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Jacqueline Slocombe

Jacqueline is a HR Manager and whilst this fulfils her, it never achieves the fulfilment that creativity can bring. She is often sad, but never empty. Everyday is a moment where she can find an opportunity. Today was a difficult day. more…

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