Analysis of Desiring to Be With You

Nancy Rodriquez 1965 (Temple)



Desiring To Be With You
By Nancy Rodriquez

I would move mountains aside,
and I would take down the stars in the Galaxy,
there is one specific reason why,
wherever you are, I want to be,
There is no shame in loving you from afar,
in the life you have made for yourself now,
I want to be able to look into your eyes,
and reconnect somehow,
Though the dreams we made have taken a back seat,
You have qualities buried deep,
and I would like to bring them out of you again,
to see the beautiful smile you possess,
while we overcome the pain,
it would be wonderful to be blessed,
While others advise me to stay away,
they do not see what is inside my heart,
and what I go through from day to day,
while experiencing every emotion,
I still carry this deep devotion,
desiring to be with you.


Scheme Ax xbxbxcxcxxxxxxdxdeeA
Poetic Form
Metre 01001111 110010 1111001 011110100100 111010101 010111111 11110101101 0011111011 111110110111 00011 10111110011 11100101 011111111101 1101001101 111001 111100111 1100111101 1111110111 011111111 101000100010 111011010 01001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 784
Words 172
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 20
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 306
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

Though my beloved has lost his way, my love for him will never fade.

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Written on May 11, 2023

Submitted by txpoet65 on May 11, 2023

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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