Analysis of My light

My light 1981 (Portsmouth)



Inside I have a strong thunderstorm
Fighting a cold front
about to lose control
And become a twister
My kids are the stars
That light up my sky
And shine trough
My darkness.


Scheme ABCDEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 01110110 10011 011101 001010 11101 11111 011 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 176
Words 36
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

The poem is about my life, and how my children are the light of my life.

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by julieh.17884 on May 16, 2023

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