Analysis of I’m Sorry

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Hurting you is the worst I can do
The very opposite of what I feel
All too human is what I am
Putting you through
Pain and sorrow
Bears no resemblance
With right or reason
You are so soft
A heart so precious
So it should come as
No surprise for me to say
I’m sorry.

The most beautiful one I love
You bore the worst I can be
To riddle you down
And reduce you to pieces
Seems reckless
Unforgivable as well
Should’ve known better
Before you I’m accused
You’re right to bury me
I ask you to forgive
The one who loves you saying
I’m sorry.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


Scheme axxaxxxxbxxC xcxxbxdxcxxC xd
Poetic Form
Metre 101101111 0101001111 11101111 1011 1010 11010 11110 1111 01110 11111 1011111 110 01100111 1101111 11011 0011110 110 010011 1110 011101 111101 111101 0111110 110 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 821
Words 161
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 12, 12, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 209
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

Asking for forgiveness

Font size:
 

Written on May 16, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on May 16, 2023

48 sec read
6

Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

All Charles Edward York poems | Charles Edward York Books

5 fans

Discuss this Charles Edward York poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "I’m Sorry" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/159507/i%E2%80%99m-sorry>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    29
    days
    18
    hours
    2
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "Stopping by Woods On a Snowy Evening"?
    A Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    B William Shakespeare
    C John Keats
    D Robert Frost