Analysis of my lover



I love my relation shit so much
Even tho its only been a month
It feels like 20 years
We started dating april 18th
Yes i know its very soon
Buts thats ok for me
I feel like ima drown with out him
Presser on my heart when i see him
My heart is like a volcano
Ready to explode of love instead of lava
He treats me like im a princess
And hes a strong  prince
He holds the doors for me
He loves me like its the end of the world
I feel like the only girl
When hes with me i zone out
I feel the sun stars looking down at us
Just me and my lover
I feel hot like the summer
With out him cold like winter
He holds me non stop like a bear
He protects me from anything that tires to hurt me
Im like the sun and hes like \the moon
Im his future wife and hes my groom
I felt like i fell in love really fast
 Fast just like a racer on the track
My love grabs him and wont let go
We work with each other and understand how we feel
Its like beauty and the beast
We have our ugy times ( the beast)
And we have our beauty
I run like a track star when i see him
No matter how far
Its like we travel the world
Even tho its  only in 1 small state
I miss him when i dont see him
Hes right down the street but
Its like hes on the other side of the world
Cant wait for tomorrow
To see my sweet treat lover  
Our relationship is like a carnival


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,327
Words 297
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 41
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,024
Words per stanza (avg) 291

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my new realtionship that saved me from a toxic relationship

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by miyawhite95 on May 19, 2023

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