Analysis of Selfish Humanity- Redbrae Road , Kirkintilloch



The flash car flashed passed me in a great rush
And I wondered what was he rushing to ?
Further up the road I saw the result
A dying blackbird twitching its last move.
Which made me to ask myself why, oh, why  
Did he drive so fast, nothing came to mind ?
Did he not see nor care to see it die ?
Nor see the remnant of life left behind ?
Killed for no more reason than a fat man
Rushing his food then catching his breath
For feasting at a fast food restaurant
So that he too can rush to his own death.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0111110011 0110111101 1010111001 0101010111 111111111 1111110111 1111111111 1101011101 1111101011 101111011 110101110 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 502
Words 109
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 385
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Written on May 26, 2023

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Deek Robertson

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