Analysis of Gloomy Midnight Breeze

Abbas 1996 (Lahore)



In a gloomy midnight,
When the wind does blow,
From where it comes,
You’ll never ever know.

Whatever it touches,
It feels like snow.
When hasty, it bends,
A tree, like a bow.

Watching me shivering,
My quivering elbow,
Laughing from a tree,
A big black crow.

"Stop this breeze, God!
Or make it slow."
Here it comes again.
"Oh! NO! NO! NO!"


Scheme XAXA XAXX XAXA XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 00101 10111 1111 110101 10110 1111 11011 01101 101100 11001 10101 0111 1111 1111 11101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 343
Words 82
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This is the first English poem I wrote in 2020 during a December Midnight. This poem is about a person describing a ghost of cool breeze he faces in a winter midnight that he fears.

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Written on December 18, 2020

Submitted by abbaskhank78 on May 29, 2023

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Abbas Khan is a medical student from Pakistan and not a poet. He has written a very few poetry in native language. Neither expert in English language nor in poetry. more…

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