Analysis of God, Why Am I Lonely?



Why do I feel so lonely?
Why do I feel so alone?
Is it because I don't love myself,
or is it because I don't know love?
Do I need to become a better Christian,
so I know how loved I am?
Please tell me God, I need to know.
Why do I feel so lonely?
Why do I feel so alone?
I can change and try to love others more.
But will they love me in return?
No one has shown me a greater love God.
Only you can love me more.
So, if you can forgive me,
I will strive to love myself more.
Then I will not feel lonely,
and I won't feel alone anymore.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 1111101 11011111 111011111 11110101010 1111111 11111111 1111110 1111101 1110111101 11111001 1111101011 1011111 1111011 1111111 1111110 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 537
Words 134
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 396
Words per stanza (avg) 118

About this poem

I wrote this poem during moments of self reflection.

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Written on May 01, 2023

Submitted by lsusanrn on May 03, 2023

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L. Susan Warner

I grew up in Southwest Iowa on a farm. I have developed a love for writing poetry through the years. more…

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