Analysis of ON THE GO

Ken Bartlett 1934 (Leominsterr Mass)



As a wee lad, there were so many things
 I needed and wanted to know.  What did it
mean when someone exclaimed:
“he/she is always on the go”?
Whenever some question was asked of an adult,
 I seldom received a positive result.
 “Children should be seen and not heard”,
 is the response I got and that was the final word!
Left to my own devices, I just had to figure it out.
Thus, with limited knowledge and face in a pout,
the solution to my query was sought
with no information and an abundance of corrupt thought. Well, I watched and I watched, but never caught anyone coming or going a lot, so I thought and I
thought.  In an unexpected kind of way,
a resolution plopped into my head one day
Baby sister was having her nappy changed.
Younger brother exclaimed: “She sure goes a lot!”
Light bulbs flashed and thinking was rearranged.
Not the answer expected, but his words hit the spot.
With some understanding now of  'come and go',
 there was still much more I needed to know.   
When grownups are going to go somewhere,
Where do they go and what do they wear?
Do they wear nappies too?  
 I kept watch on the door to our only loo.   
I searched the dirty laundry, but nothing was there,
no dirty diapers were found that adults could wear.
When late at night and others were asleep.
I would climb from my bed and around the house creep.  during the day it was difficult to stay very long in the loo. For a family of eleven, it was a busy place to go, look and do.  It was understood no one should sit and dawdle for long, even though some did and made it so painfully wrong.  That is why I renamed it, the place you 'come to and go and go!'.

At night there was more time to explore when the lights were low.  In the medicine chest, I found a solution to my quest. A large unopened box of Ex-Lax,  Something all could ingest and  assist our family not to dawdle.  When we next made fudge
I added the Ex-Lax to hasten our 'come and go' with a nudge.

With the 'come and go dilemma' still unresolved,
 I now embraced a new conundrum to ponder and solve.  I heard Mom and Dad talking about babies et al.
What did it mean?: “I do not have the need or an urge at all!”


Scheme XXXABBCCDDXXEEFGFGAAHHIIHHXA JJ XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101101 11001011111 11101 1111101 010110111101 11001010001 10111011 1001110110101 111101011111011 111001001001 0010111011 11010010101011111011110110101100111101 101010111 00101011111 1010110011 10100111101 111010101 1010010111101 1101011101 1111111011 11110111 111101111 11111 111101110101 110101011011 1101000110111 1111010001 1111110010111001111001110100110100101011010111101110111110101110111011110011111011011110101 1111111011010100100111001011101010111110110100110100111011111 11001111010101101 101010101001 110101010110011110110011011 111111110111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,194
Words 449
Sentences 32
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 28, 2, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 550
Words per stanza (avg) 142

About this poem

This submission is about two frustrations from a long list of questions a young lad was too embarrassed to ask about.

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Written on May 11, 2023

Submitted by compostken on May 11, 2023

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Ken Bartlett

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