Analysis of PTSD - The Soldier and the Bottle



Sands of time have brought us down
For blood we’ve spilled upon the ground
Promises were given and lies were told
Was the bill of goods that we were sold

They pin their medals and offer us pride
But the ones who lived are the ones who died
Brothers fell wayside soul by soul
But it was the living who paid the toll

We fought their battles and gave our lives
Returning home broken to children and wives
Limbs and bodies left dead on the field
Their corpses were used as human shield

We gave and we left the families we had
Our scars returned us broken and sad
Now we find ourselves lost in a bottle of gin
Fighting a new war as a battle of sin

We stood strong and proud until bodies fell
Where bombs blew open our living hell
Tearing our lives apart one and all
For it was our spirits that took the fall

The killing has stolen our will to live
For acts we’ve committed we cannot forgive
So please bear with us for who we are not
Now the bullets we dodge are a whiskey shot


Scheme XXAA BBCC XXDD EEFF GGHH XXII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111111 11110101 1000100101 101111101 1111001011 1011110111 1011111 1110101101 1111001101 01011011001 101011101 110011101 11011010011 1010111001 1110011001011 10011101011 1110101101 1111010101 1010101101 11110101101 01011010111 11101011001 1111111111 10101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 998
Words 215
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This poem is not about me. I was unable to serve due to medical conditions. This is for those who suffer the rigors of war. :-)

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Written on May 02, 2023

Submitted by Symmetry60 on May 02, 2023

Modified by Symmetry60 on May 15, 2024

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Steven Dupere

With a book of poetry to boast, Waltz of Semantic Tongues, Steven has been challenging nervous canvases for more time than time can shake an eon at. This is a shard of that fallout. more…

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