Analysis of Deeds



The train whistles
Freedom dreams and work
There is a lot of jerks
Got to try
All set to say good bye
With one talent we all vent
My god the bills for rent
It’s good to question why
Some days I just fry
Always comes back to me, myself, and I
What do I buy?
Lend a hand
Countries a necessary band
A smart ass at 13
This I have seen.


Scheme ABCDDEEDDDDFFGH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 0110 10101 110111 111 111111 1110111 110111 111101 11111 11111101 1111 101 1001001 0111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 335
Words 75
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 255
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted on June 14, 2023

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