Analysis of Shell Shock



Sometimes I feel like a turtle hiding in its shell.
I'm   watching. and wafting to be all well.

So should explore the deep blue sea.
Instead of wondering why things don't come to me.

I am looking at the fish that pass me by.
Pondering this thought while looking at the sky.

Why do the fish always seem to know where to go, while turtle always seems so timid and slow.


Scheme AA BB CC X
Poetic Form
Metre 0111101010011 1100101111 11010111 011100111111 11101011111 10011110101 110111111111101111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 373
Words 80
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

one I wrote about having trouble in life up and downs

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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by bluxen74 on June 14, 2023

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