Analysis of Ashes In Shame



Bush drivers and plumbers
don’t start the wars
The nurse or school teacher
too busy inured
What’s common among us
with tasks to withstand
The elected entitled
our blood on their hands
Without a real job
and whose terms don’t expire
They poison the well
with aggrandizements dire
To them it’s a game
that they cannot lose
Their voters just pawns
in a continual ruse
But one day the reaper
with sickle in hand
Will come to reclaim
what’s stolen bedamned
And the serfs will rise up
in an infamous rage
The despots left burning
—their ashes in shame

(Radnor Pennsylvania: June, 2023)


Scheme XXABXCXXXDXDEFXFACEBXXXE X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 110010 1101 011110 11001 010011 11101 0010010 101111 01011 011101 11001 111 11101 11101 11011 0001001 111010 11001 11101 0101 001111 011001 01110 11001 100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 104
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 24, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 234
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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