Analysis of You’re My Future
You’re My Future
Something about you says my future
And dreams begin to awaken
Your eyes are enough for me
There is a universe
Echoes and ripples of light
A whole new world
So exciting and new
I never want to sleep.
Your skin of exotic luminosity shines
Diamonds of feminine beauty
Radiate a romantic soul
Gentle as the softest sea
Far as a distant shore
Yet how could it be
You touch me deep inside
And I long to share your space?
What difference is distance to us?
And so it seems I marvel
At your words in silence
Caressing me so soft and close
Is it any wonder it’s you
Who invites my surrender
Eager to embrace your charms
And make my home your paradise?
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| Scheme | A AXBXXXCX XBXBXBXX XXXXCAXX XA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1110 100111110 01011010 1110111 11010 1001011 0111 101001 110111 11101011 10110010 10000101 1010101 110101 11111 111101 0111111 110011011 0111110 111010 01011101 11101011 1011010 1010111 0111110 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 928 |
| Words | 180 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 8, 8, 8, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 27 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 147 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
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That moment when you see your future in your lovers eyes
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