Analysis of Cherish

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



Our day has come,
All our battles have been won.

No need to strive for worldly greed,
All good things through Him received.

Truth:
We must face the foe,
Into our hearts we must let Him go.

Spirit searchers
With the light
Eyes of
Fire
Pure
Delight
Cast's out all
No Canaanite.

If we go with the flow,
And get in the know,
No longer will life be boring.

Like a babe on His back,
You can ride the wind,
Even when your snoring!

No more dull--know it all's
Trying to find answers

Take each day as it comes.

It's so much fun...

Praising Him for the answers.

What puzzles me though
Is all the rejection?

He's pure and good
And full of affection.

What has he done?
To drive us away..

Return through His Son
He made the way.


Scheme XA XX XBB CDXXXDXD BBE XXE XC X A C BA XA AF AF
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 11010111 11111101 1111101 1 11101 0110111111 1010 101 11 10 1 01 111 110 111101 01001 11011110 101111 11101 101110 111111 101110 111111 1111 1011010 11011 110010 1101 011010 1111 11101 01111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 752
Words 182
Sentences 15
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 8, 3, 3, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Written on July 04, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on July 04, 2023

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