Analysis of July 7th, 1:40 am



it shouldn’t hurt to see you move on
especially since it’s been so long
you are filling the space of me with him
talking about books, music and sharing jokes like we used to do
he’s slowly becoming your favourite person like I had been
I shouldn’t feel bitter watching you create the memories we planned together
but it hurts seeing you go about your day
and are completely okay
meanwhile I’m still stuck in the past where you promised me it would be forever


Scheme ABCDEFGGF
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 11111111 01011111 1110011111 1001110010111111 11001011101111 1111010101010011010 11110110111 010101 111100111101111010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 477
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 368
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on July 07, 2023

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