Analysis of Blood & Love
Love is not so sweet & innocent
Or it would wane & die
The only love that works that way
Is the simple love of a child
True love, it’s chaotic & messy
It’s deep, it’s dark & sometimes cold
Undoubtedly it remains a part of you until
You grow grey & old
It stays with you forever
Deep down in the marrow of your bones
You see me & I may appear to be living
But I’m simply existing
I’m breathing, surviving on thin air
I feel without oxygen
My heart beats
but it’s off again
If it beats it’s only moving blood
It was meant to pump blood
But beat for love
Any wound that he may have bore out
Where my heart & soul were torn out
No these wounds they’ve not left me dead
They still bleed a blood that was his
It stays with you forever
Deep down in the marrow of your bones
You see me & I may appear to be living
But I’m simply existing
I’m breathing, surviving on thin air
I feel without oxygen
My heart beats
but it’s off again
If it beats it’s only moving blood
It was meant to pump blood
But beat for love
Now… I may look used up
All tattered & bruised up
Without him here to hold me in one piece
I’m simply pulling apart at the seams
There has to be new life left inside me yet
His soul, it has not gone from me
We were not something able to forget
I’ve a piece of his heart here, left inside of my chest
It stays with you forever
Deep down in the marrow of your bones
You see me & I may appear to be living
But I’m simply existing
I’m breathing, surviving on thin air
I feel without oxygen
My heart beats
but it’s off again
If it beats it’s only moving blood
It was meant to pump blood
But beat for love
Past the existence of this world we live on
In the realm where we’ll someday dwell
Whether I go to heaven,
or find myself in hell
There’s one thing that will always remain my truth & will anchor this tortured soul.
It’s the part of me that was once empty, that his love had made whole.
You see it stays with you forever
Deep down in the marrow of your bones
You see me & I may appear to be living
But I’m simply existing
I’m breathing, surviving on thin air
I feel without oxygen
My heart beats
but it’s off again
If it beats it’s only moving blood
It was meant to pump blood
But beat for love
It was meant to beat for you, my love
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111100 11111 01011111 10101101 11101010 1111011 0100101011101 1111 1111010 110010111 11111011110 1110010 110010111 1101100 111 11101 111110101 111111 1111 101111111 1111011 11111111 11101111 1111010 110010111 11111011110 1110010 110010111 1101100 111 11101 111110101 111111 1111 111111 11011 0111111011 1101001101 11111110111 11111111 1011010101 1011111101111 1111010 110010111 11111011110 1110010 110010111 1101100 111 11101 111110101 111111 1111 10010111111 0011111 1011110 11101 11111101111101101 1011111110111111 111111010 110010111 11111011110 1110010 110010111 1101100 111 11101 111110101 111111 1111 111111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,306 |
Words | 482 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 11, 4, 11, 8, 11, 6, 11, 1 |
Lines Amount | 71 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 192 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 51 |
About this poem
Written for my twin flame
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