Analysis of Where Are You God

Marian J. Ruley 1952 (North Carolina)



Before I got saved I was looking for God in all the wrong places
I looked for Him in my friends
I looked for Him in the child in me
I looked for Him in boyfriends
I looked for Him partying
I looked for Him the clothes I wore
I looked for Him in the food I ate
I looked for Him in pleasing other people
I looked for Him in taking the back seat to others
I looked for Him on the bus, the train, the plane
I looked for Him everywhere and couldn’t find him
Suddenly I stopped looking and got still
I heard a small voice say to me
I’ve been here waiting patiently for you to stop looking  


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111111011010110 1111011 111100101 111101 1111100 11110111 111100111 11110101010 1111010011110 11111010101 1111100111 1001110011 11011111 11110100111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 588
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 457
Words per stanza (avg) 122

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I was trying to find myself. Realizing I found myself when I found God.

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by mjp4ruley on June 29, 2023

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Marian J. Ruley

I was born in Whitakers North Carolina. I came up north at the age of 4 years old. I have been married for 49 years. I am a mother of 2, grandmother of 5 and a great grandmother of 6. I love writing, reading, walking, baking, and going to flea markets. more…

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