Analysis of Where are you...



Never again
To watch the night become a new day
Nor silence that fits this summer-time
Nor with you here to love and lay
What is left seems just a 'mime'.

Never again
To feel your embrace
Nor to slender through goofy streets
Nor to share our caring space
Does it help to read some pray's?

For again
History just reminded nest of kin
Those who seek eternal power
Have choosen to reign is doubtful sin
Hear the bombs; our iron shower!

For again
I hide to stay amongst hope
And meet all ages and faces of fear
I wonder how mankind can cope
Is there no feel; just to shed a tear?

Where are you?
Do you wander around in misty smoke
And did you survive without me knowing
Did your senses ajdust and cope
To the bodies that keep on showing?

Hope it is
That it wasn't you I found up-here
In curling lines op smoke that fly
May echoes of my voice once cheer
When we meet in a new blue sky!


Scheme Abcbc Adxdd Aefef Aghgx xxigi xxjhj
Poetic Form Etheree  (37%)
Metre 1001 110101011 110111101 11111101 1111101 1001 11101 11101101 11110101 1111111 101 1001010111 11101010 11111101 101101010 101 1111011 0111001011 11011111 111111101 111 1110010101 0110101110 1110101 101011110 111 111011111 01011111 11011111 11100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 901
Words 190
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

The situation in Ukraine shows us a day to day survival of those who are confronted with this useless war.

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Submitted by Cornelis5th on June 28, 2023

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