Analysis of My Antique Doll
Cracked, chipped, broken pretty porcelain skin
Soft fake hair you like wearing on your head
You’re falling apart, I’ll mend you within
I’ll glue you whole, you look partially dead
I will color your face and make it shine
Brown painted eyes that make you look alive
Smooth body, I want it on top of mine
Wear this dress doll, I will bring you to life
Plush pretty pink heart shaped ceramic lips
Stand on your tip toes and give me a kiss
Grab my hand,
I’ll hold your delicate hips
My gorgeous antique Victorian doll,
Open your arms I am starting to fall
Look into my retina as you cry
Tears are causing paint to drip on the floor
All of the signs I stupidly ignored
I know you are guilty, so say no more
I thought you were no one else’s but mine
I wish your beauty never caught my eye
You should have confessed another love formed
I see you are also broken inside
Through empty smiles,
Through all of your white lies
As I shape your broken ceramic face
As the ugly pieces fall into place
Girl, if only you weren’t so broken
We never had to feel like a mistake
Beautiful woman damaged from within
You are just like a doll,
gorgeous and fake.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110101001 1111110111 1100111101 1111111001 1110110111 1101111101 1101111111 1111111111 1101110101 1111101101 111 1111001 1100101001 1011111011 1011100111 1110111101 1101110001 1111101111 1110111011 1111010111 1110101011 1111101001 1101 111111 1111100101 1010101011 111011110 1101111001 1001010101 111101 1001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,156 |
Words | 228 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 6, 7, 10 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 225 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 55 |
About this poem
Trying to fix someone is not your responsibility. 10 syllables per line.
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