Analysis of My Hope

Nicolas Simpson 1983 (Illinois)



With the compassion I have,
And expression of my life skills,
I should become the happy man with a shave,
But within it still kills,
Taking chances of what I got,
Can't believe I got shot,
Protecting my family,
I sacrifice my life for them,
And all I got is thrown in prison for something I didn't do,
But I'm letting the big man decide what I need to do,
Pleading guilty to something it takes a big toll on me,
It tears me up in inside,
Makes me wanna cry,
So I can mend,
Mend with my kids again........


Scheme ABCBDDEFGGEHIJK
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1001011 00101111 11010101101 101111 10101111 101111 0101100 1101111 0111110101101101 1110011111111 10101101101111 1111001 11101 1111 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 504
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 100
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Written on July 16, 2023

Submitted by nicolassimpson21 on July 16, 2023

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Nicolas Simpson

I grew up in a poor enviroment with no money. And been struggling for years to get my poetry going and read by a lot of people. I didn't know how to to go get my poetry read. So i became to a Poetry reading and i really enjoyed it. It inspired me to become a poet. And plus I have an aunt the writes poetry too. more…

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