Analysis of In the Bertram
Doug Blair 1951 (London)
She’s out of storage
Beautifully refurbished
Re-equipped for this summer.
New marina helps much.
And available island cottage.
Bertram has trim, length, power
Just right for Bay waves
And winds.
Fishing assistant extraordinaire.
And oh how I love
Dropping in the line.
Pickerel, pike, maybe
Muskie, if coldish waters.
Not much action.
Just like some fat log
Immovable.
And the lure for him is GIGANTIC.
My wife is now also
Quite a marine pro.
Brings the Dog.
He will be up front
Catching all the breezes.
Tongue out happily.
Loves bringing her camera.
The grays, greens and dark blue.
Maybe a loon, baby in tow
Or stunning crimson sunset.
And the clouds, the clouds.
Rehearsing the routes of Champlain
Of First Nations, trapping.
Of times at summer camp.
Yes…love that Bertram.
SBB. (that’s my Brother’s story)
Scheme | AXBXA BXXXXX CXXDXX EEDXXC XXEXXXXX X C |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110 100010 1011110 101011 001001010 1011110 11111 01 10010010 01111 10001 100110 101110 1110 11111 0100 001111010 111110 10011 101 11111 101010 11100 1100100 011011 10011001 110101 00101 01001101 111010 111101 11110 1111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 829 |
Words | 168 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 6, 6, 6, 8, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
A favourite motor craft for Georgian Bay.
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Written on July 26, 2023
Submitted by dougb.21370 on July 26, 2023
Modified by dougb.21370 on July 26, 2023
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