Analysis of Loose Machine



So eloquent is your inundated drum,
every strike leaves me entranced, yearning for more.
So evident is your fervent tongue,
every expression weaves me enhanced, grateful of yore.

I cannot see your face..
Only echoes of manufactured haste, and
tears of decadent taste.
For your witness chose to intervene,
and forewarn of this loose machine.


Scheme XAXA XXXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 1100111001 100111011011 110011101 10001011011011 110111 1010101010 111001 11101101 00111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 341
Words 63
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 5
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on July 22, 2023

Submitted by Sorav on July 30, 2023

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