Analysis of Dear younger me



Dear 15-year-old me
Dear baby me
Dear younger me
I'm sorry

I couldn't keep that smile
That always made you so beautiful
That smile that made you sparkle
And lit up a room, never fake
That smile I failed keep

Your eyes ended up being more sparkly
From the water dropping each night
Those eyes that never went through bleeds
Those eyes that were never red
Now I color them with the darkest red

I'm sorry I failed you
I broke my promise
And made things very hard for you
I crushed your little heart
To pieces that will take eternity to glue

Dear younger me
Sparkle more
Dear younger me
I'm sorry


Scheme aaAA xbbxx axxcc dxdxd AxAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1101 1101 110 110111 11111100 1111110 01101101 11111 1110110110 10101011 11110111 1110101 1110110101 110111 11110 01110111 111101 110111010011 1101 101 1101 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 605
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

It's about my apologies to my younger self for making bad decisions as I grew up which alternately harmed her

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Written on July 04, 2023

Submitted by Kkardisian on July 04, 2023

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