Analysis of Loving In The Dark



Loving In The Dark

I like loving in the dark
Its the place lovers can share
Naked and not ashamed
Skin glows bright
Heating up the bed chamber
The sexy wet shower
And the night of a thousand stars
Kisses softly circle lips
Breasts caress each other
Hands hold bodies
Hungry as infinite mouths
Satiated by raw sex
So nasty moans resemble
Animals in heat
And lust unleashed.

Loving you in the dark
I find your heart wide open
Your legs spread wide
And wrapped around my head
My waist and my muscle
Begging me to penetrate
Your wet dream flower
Grips my mouth and tongue
Taking my stiff breath
All the way inside
Pleasure palpitations
Repeat with so much urgency
Our union falls off the roof
We land in orgasms
Drenched in each others pearls.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A AXXXBBXXBXXXCXX AXDXCXBXXDXXXXX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 10001 1110001 1011011 100101 111 1010110 010110 00110101 1010101 101110 1110 1011001 1111 1101010 10001 0101 101001 1111110 1111 010111 110110 101110 11110 11101 10111 10101 10010 01111100 10101101 110100 101101 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,003
Words 186
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 15, 15, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 45

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Written on August 08, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 10, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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