Analysis of Soul Of The Heart



I’m tired, and I continue to need & desire
I see the struggle of my seed provider
Her shell is a ghost of her lost strength
Glimpses of what’s left I know will soon be taken

Damn the mind that gets lost in time
My heart flutters with illness in kind
Do you see the pain you cause?
The ashes will rise to claim the weakest dust

I am losing the battle of watching
Watching the physical last longer
Longer than the once strong mind
Do you see understand how we suffer?


Scheme AAXX XBXX XABA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1100101011010 11010111010 011011011 101011111110 10111101 111011001 1110111 01011110101 1110010110 100100110 1010111 111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 475
Words 99
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on August 11, 2023

Submitted by scottf.09575 on August 11, 2023

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