Analysis of FAILURE



FAILURE
Theodosia Garrison
Oh, long and dark the stairs I trod
With stumbling feet to find my God.

Gaining a foothold bit by bit,
Then slipping back and losing it;

Never progressing, but striving still
With weakening grasp and fainting will;

Bleeding to climb to God, while He
Serenely smiled, un-noting me.

Then came a certain time when I
Loosened my hold and fell thereby.

Down to the lowest step my fall
As though I had not climbed at all.

And while I lay despairing there,
Listen, --  a footfall on the stair!

In the same path where I, dismayed,
Faltered and fell and lay afraid!

And, lo! When hope had ceased to be,
My God came down the stairs to me.


Scheme XXAA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH DD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10 1100 11010111 110011111 1001111 11010101 100101101 110010101 10111111 010011101 11010111 10110111 11010111 11111111 01110101 1001101 00111101 10010101 01111111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 663
Words 142
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Theodosia Garrison

also known as: Theodosia Pickering Garrison; Mrs. Frederic Faulks. Worked on the staff of Life Magazine; helped to organize the 250th Anniversary of the City of Newark, NJ (she was also born in Newark, NJ); resided in New Jersey. Was a houseguest of the famed poet E. Wilcox; made the Who's Who 1914 list. Information is difficult to collect on this poet. More will be posted at a later date. more…

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