Analysis of Idealistic romance

Mauli gupta 2006 (New Delhi)



A pleasant time came
Making my brain deadpan
Making me crazy
For the guy who doesn't even deserve me

People kept on warning
The guy you are with
Is a perfect example of toxicity
But me being mad in love
Was ignoring every red flag
And building fantasy casserole of future with narcissist

But maybe the god was cooking blooming plans for dumb me
Making me realize the value of the life
Sending me a guy from the fantasy that I didn't even surmised

Me trying to heal my wounds
Without any safeguard of my heart
But this time infatuation was perfectly teenage dream of love

A Disney night came
With full of hopes and fingers crossed
Asking the Romeo will u be my man
The answer was big yes
And so the story continued
Just like a Taylor swift tune....


Scheme ABCC XXCDXX CXX XXD AXBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01011 10111 10110 10111010011 101110 01111 100101010100 1110101 101010011 010100101101100 11001110101111 10110010101 101011010011101001 1101111 01101111 111001011001111 01011 11110101 1001011111 010111 01010010 1101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 756
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 3, 3, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

It's a realistic poem about love which youngsters usually fell in. It's a poem about realisation after which the poet fells in a dreamy love story.

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Written on June 01, 2023

Submitted by memauligupta17 on August 13, 2023

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Mauli gupta

17 year old girl. Has strong opinion but prefer turning her thoughts into poems. more…

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