Analysis of The fire



Something flickered inside me ,
Suddenly it went dark and darker ,
I lighted the candles to see what is it .
Something made my body shiver ,
The temperature went low and lower.
I searched for humans ,
There were some creatures ,
Except the one I have wanted to see .
A door blue in colour,
Lured me to open it ,
Nobody expected that ,
What flickered inside me ,
Was a box full of memories ,
And I just saw them die
In front of my eyes.


Scheme ABCBBDEABCFAGHI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010011 100111010 11001011111 10111010 010011010 11110 10110 0101111011 01101 111101 10101 110011 10111100 011111 01111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 94
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Written on August 24, 2023

Submitted by bharalihiya293 on August 24, 2023

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